Clarifying what the project is before deeper revision begins.
Sometimes the problem isn’t the draft.
It’s that the concept itself hasn’t been clearly articulated.
This service focuses on defining the core dramatic engine of the project so the idea communicates cleanly on the page.
Includes:
One refined logline
One-page story summary
Brief high-level feedback on concept clarity and narrative direction
Best suited to writers who:
Are preparing to pitch or submit
Feel the idea is present but difficult to articulate
Want the project expressed clearly and concisely
Material required: a brief project description and draft script.
Scope: Scripts up to 120 pages.
Turnaround: approximately 2 weeks from submission.