Structural diagnosis followed by a guided rewrite strategy.
A full structural review combined with a 90-minute development conversation focused on rebuilding the script deliberately.
This tier extends beyond diagnosis into collaborative development of the next draft.
The written analysis identifies where the story holds and where pressure leaks.
The session then focuses on how to execute the next draft.
Includes:
Full written structural report
Protagonist causality assessment
Escalation & climax analysis
Thematic alignment review
Clear rewrite priorities
90-minute development session (Zoom)
Best suited for writers who:
Are preparing a serious rewrite
Want to discuss structural solutions in real time
Are aiming for professional submission
The development session is scheduled after you receive the written report.
Scope: Scripts up to 120 pages.
Turnaround: approximately 2 weeks from submission.