Orientation before intervention.
A focused diagnostic read clarifying how the script currently functions at a structural level.
This review identifies the primary strengths of the draft and the points where pressure begins to weaken.
This service identifies structural pressure points but does not provide a full structural breakdown.
Includes:
Logline refinement
One-page story summary
Series overview paragraph (for pilots)
Concise written diagnostic outlining:
concept clarity
protagonist function
structural strengths
pressure points in the structure
Ideal if:
You’re early in development
Something in the script isn't landing yet
You want a professional read before committing to deeper structural work
Scope: Scripts up to 120 pages
Turnaround: approximately 2 weeks from submission